Sometimes, my brain runs in circles when it’s trying to figure out something story related. There are so many moving parts to a story, it can be so hard to fit them all together, which is why “simple” is king. The rub is that “simple” can be hard to come by sometimes.

I’m massaging and brainstorming this one particular story thread in this book that I can just feel isn’t there yet. It’s not engaging enough yet. It’s too static. Not enough dilemma and action yet. It’s also just not exciting enough yet. It needs more flash.

But, it’s a toughie. I’ve written myself into a corner with this second book in certain aspects: there are certain things I’ve established with the first book that I have to keep consistent with them. That can be a challenge 😛

Anywho…I had a good Sunday. Wrote, watched the Warriors dismantle the Cavs in game 2. No crazy theatrics this game, just patent-Warriors dominance. Curry was something else today. He lit it up. LeBron was tame. He’s saving it for Games 3 and 4, you can tell. They won by 19, I think. Curry made some iiinnnsssaaannnneeee shots today. If the Dubs win, I think Curry finally wins the Finals MVP trophy.

I also got my haircut! It feels so nice 🙂

Anywho…early morning tomorrow, and I want to read for a bit.

Night! I hope your Sunday was a good one, too.

Artwork tonight from Angus McKie.